帮我改一下我的英文模联立场文件,有没有语法错误,重金赏!!

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/03 01:11:35
我们主席的要求是一个语法错误都不能有!!
Natural disasters are world-wide problems. Because of the developing industries and the increasing populations, the problems of environment become more serious. And the number of the natural disasters is increasing. The successful disaster identification, assessment, monitoring, early warning, search, rescue and recovery are based on the well-organized government, the development of technology, the maturity insurance programs and sufficient financial reserves. But the gaps of governmental abilities between the developing countries and the developed countries are pretty wide. Somalia thinks that to deal with the natural disasters, every country should get comprehensively involved in the know-how and information sharing process and the financial aid.
Somalia is one of Least Developed Countries. The major natural hazards are recurring droughts; frequent dust storms over eastern plains in summer; floods during rainy season.
In Somalia, the natural disast

第五行,maturity似乎应该改成mature
第六行,pretty不够正式。
第一段最后一句不太顺。
第二段第一句,one of the least……
floods 前面加and
frequently happened 两词对调
were continued 去掉were
第三段support加s
最后一句还是不太对劲。

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