万分火急，一篇英语短文改错！追加30

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第一行How are you? I've got a wonderful news to tell you.第二行I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my第三行further education .One hundred and twenty students took exam 第四行 for it , but only a few were chosen and I was one of them .Therefore,第五行 my parents are not happy about it.They are strong against my第六行going there.They say it is too far away that they will not see me 可能有一行对或没有

1. 去掉a
2. have和offered中间加入been
3. took和exam中间加入the
4. Therefore→However
5. strong→strongly
6. too→so

1.a→some
2.have beenoffered
3.took the exam
4.Therefore→However
5.strong→strongly
6.too→so

1. 去掉a(因为news不可数）
2. have offered中间加上been(根据句子的意思应该用被动语态）
3. took exam中间加the（特指的那次考试）
4. Therefore->However(根据上下文的意思，这里应该用转折“然而”，而不应该是“所以”）
5. strong->stronly(修饰against要用副词)
6. too->so (so...that...: "如此...以致于...")

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