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Q ：some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Other think change is always a good thing. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
In recent decades, the trend of doing the same thing and avoiding change has increased significantly especially in China, the United State of American and Australia. The term change refers to the preferred style of working and jobs by people from all over the world. In discussing it argue whether or not this increase should be seen as a positive phenomenon. The reasons for this argument include the influence of globe financial crisis, the difference in cultural expectation in changing the occupation.
With regard to the role of job in contemporary society, people living experience may be very different from their home countries. Concerning of the significant of sable job, many people, particularly those from certain Asian countries, prefer to spend
In recent decades, the trend of (doing the same thing and avoiding change)[像开头这种描述，就算用套句，也绝对不能抄原文，可以改成：staying with the same job] has increased significantly especially in China, the United State of American and Australia. The term change refers to the preferred style of working and jobs by people from all over the world. In discussing (people) argue whether or not this increase should be seen as a positive phenomenon. The reasons for this argument include the influence of globe financial crisis, the difference in cultural expectation in changing the occupation.
第一段，看起来很好，但是套句也写的太明显了。。。
With regard to the role of job(s) in contemporary society, people ('s) living experience may (be very different)[varies] from their (home去掉) countries. Concerning of the significant of sable job, many people, particularly those from certain Asian countries, prefer to spend their live doing the same thing. This is due to the fact that stable income and circumstances (require)[are