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As we know ,last sunday is the mother’day .so now I want to talk something about our parents.actually , our parents supported us as far as they could .the first speak ,first walk ,first eat and almost all of our first things are all the parents taught us step by step .what they cost on us are can’t calculate by money.every little progress of us includes a lot of endeavor of parents.and I think parents are the people who only give without compensation .but recently,I think the thing what some students do are mindless.
As we know ,several weeks ago ,a student jumped from a building and killed himself .i think it is a irresponsible and selfish action. he only considers that death can released him from the trouble .but he can’t think about his parents . especially now in china every family only have one child .his parents would bear large sad to his death.the thing will see that in the rest of day .his parents wiil spend years in sorrow.how cruel it is ！
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As we know, last Sunday is the Mother’s Day. So now I want to talk something about our parents. Actually, our parents support us as far as they can. Our first talk, first walk, first mouthful of food, almost all of our first things we learned from our parents, little by little, step by step. Their investment on bringing us up cannot be calculated in terms of money. Every little progress we make has in it a lot of efforts from our parents. And I think parents are the people who only give without expecting anything in return. But recently, I think some of the things some students do are really reckless.

As we know, a few weeks ago, a student jumped from a building and killed himself. I think it is an irresponsible and selfish act. He only considered that death would be a relief for himself from his troubles. But he did not think about his parents. Especially now in China every family only has one child. His parents would have to live the rest of their life