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一下是作文：
题目：Superstar and l
Jay is the superstar in my heart. lt's because he always hardworing and sings very well. When Jay was a boy he is lazy and no one like him and lonely,but he likes singing very much,so his mother lent him to learn piano.At last,he became a famous singer.l can learn a lot from him 最好在后面加句学到什么！就是我写不出了！行的人帮我补下啦！
Jay is the superstar in my heart.Because he always works hard and he sings very well. When Jay was a boy, he was lazy 。So no one liked him and he was lonely.He likes singing very much,so his mother let him try to play the piano and sing songs .Finally,he became a famous singer.l can learn a lot from him.And I hope to be a superstar like him in the future.
我英语自认为在班里是前二的，希望有用哈……
It's because he is always hard-working and sings very well.
he was lazy and no one liked him and he felt lonely. but he liked singing very much,so his mother sent him to learn piano.
Jay is the superstar in my heart. because he always works hard and sings very well. When Jay was a boy he was lazy and no one liked him and he was lonely,but he liked singing very much,so his mother lent him to play the piano.At last,he became a famous singer.l can learn a lot from him .
这样就可以了，意思已经出来了，不必补了。
Superstar and l
Jay is the superstar in my heart. lt's because