UC知道帮我找找语法错误 小学五下的
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老师让我们写篇小作文，写是写完了，就是怕有语法错误请高手帮我看看，谢谢了
同志们，有点儿耐心呀，本人正在打嘞
文章是这样的：
It's July ， it's sunny holiday . The animl students are have a holiday or vacation , they are very happpy , they are go to the mountains .
The mother elephant with baby elephant near the river . Sometimes they are brinkiang water , sometimes they are play water with its trunk . There is a bear , it's sleeping now . The monkey is swinging . The monkey is swinging . The two kangaroo are leaping . Look , there are some birds ， they are singing.
It's a good day . Montain harmony.(最后这句我也是蒙的，我想表达的意思是：这是美好的一天。山上很和谐（或和睦都没事儿），摆脱翻译一下。）
同志们，有点儿耐心呀，本人正在打嘞
文章是这样的：
It's July ， it's sunny holiday . The animl students are have a holiday or vacation , they are very happpy , they are go to the mountains .
The mother elephant with baby elephant near the river . Sometimes they are brinkiang water , sometimes they are play water with its trunk . There is a bear , it's sleeping now . The monkey is swinging . The monkey is swinging . The two kangaroo are leaping . Look , there are some birds ， they are singing.
It's a good day . Montain harmony.(最后这句我也是蒙的，我想表达的意思是：这是美好的一天。山上很和谐（或和睦都没事儿），摆脱翻译一下。）
It's July ， it's sunny holiday . The 1(animl) students are have a holiday 2(or vacation) , they are very happpy , they are go to the mountains .
The mother elephant with baby elephant near the river . Sometimes they are 3(brinkiang )water , sometimes they are play water with its trunk . There is a bear , it's sleeping now . The monkey is 4(swinging) .5( The monkey is swinging) .6( The two) 7(kangaroo )are leaping . Look , there are some birds ， they are singing.
It's a good day .8（ Montain harmony.)
1animals
2删去
3bringing
4swimming
5多余了，删去这句话
6Two
7kangaroo
8Montains are harmony
让看也得先把内容发上来啊
作文呢？？
The mother elephant with baby elephant near the river .
这句好像有点问题哦！！！
最后一句是对的