修改一下啊，有错就改

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My family
There are three people in my family。My mother，my father，and I。My father is a attorney。My mother is a nurse 。I’m a student。I’m in class five grade six。
I’m 12years old。

My family
There are three people in my family。My mother，my father，and I。My father is an attorney。My mother is a nurse 。I’m a student。I’m in Class Five ,Grade Six。
I’m 12 years old。

There are three people in my family。（逗号改为冒号，后面的my小写）My mother，my father，and I。My father is a（改为an，因为后面是原音开头) attorney。My mother is a nurse 。I’m a student。I’m in class five grade six。
I’m 12years old。

My Family
There are three people in my family. My mother，my father and I. My father is an attorney. My mother is a nurse. I'm a student. I'm in class five, grade six.
I'm 12 years' old.