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Do you believe that there's a magic WC in the world?I am going to well you about the magic WC.It was an old and dirty WC until there was an old wizard coming.He pointed to the things in the WC,and then this WC became a beautiful and clean WC.Then the old wizard pointed to the wall of the WC,and it became a magic WC then,but the magic WC was moved to a green forest by the old wizard.The wizard smiled and went away.Nobody can find this magic WC wasily if he doesn't find that forest.After a long time,a boy in a smart shirt to this forest.Because he wanted to live with animals and he believed that a forest must be the best plave for him.He fount that there was a colourful housetop appearing in the forest.He was very wondering in his heart.Then he made a big decision that went into the freen forest very courageous.He was very tired but still persisted in climbing the mountain and found it out.He was right!After about 2 hours

总体上写得很不错,应该是你自己编写的故事的吧,呵呵~~~很有想象力哦 ,就是有些语法需要指正

比如After a long time,a boy in a smart shirt to this forest.缺少动词,这是一句完整的句子,可以加上came to this forest(不是很理解 in a smart shirt是什么意思,是small吧)

还有,that a forest must be the best plave 里的"plave"是"place"吧后面"He fount "里的find的过去时是""found"

He was very wondering in his heart.Then he made a big decision that went into the freen forest very courageous.我知道你这句话想要表达的意思,这里不是很适合用"very wondering ",后面适合加"if从句,或者about

后面注意一下courageous应用副词形式

and found it out应用完整的句子

大概的看了一下,有什么问题你可以百度上找我~~~我乐于帮助哦~~~~

没什么大的语法错误，但是感觉太啰嗦了，你不必老用magic WC,要适当用代词it等来替代，而且，其实老外不太喜欢用WC指代厕所的，WC其实是比较粗俗的一种讲法，toilet，bathroom更好

1.W/C不好 用bathroom最好。
2. Then the old wizard pointed to the wall of the WC,and it became a magic WC then,but the magic WC was moved to a green forest by the old wizard.

我稍微修改下帮你：Then this old wizard fingered to the