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China
China is one of the biggest countries in the world.It has an area of nearly 9.6 million square kilometres. So it is the third biggest country in the world. To the east is the Pacific Ocean. The Indian Ocean is to the south.
China is divided into thirty-two provinces and two special provinces, one is called HongKong, the other is called Mocow, and we can say proudly that HongHong is one of the most rapidly deceloping cities of China even in the world.
The capital of China is Beijing, it is one of the most famous ancient sivilization cities of China. It is a modern city, too. Has been held the 29th Olympic Games at 2008 successful. The foreigners spoke highly of this Olympic Games and a large number of people had felt a particular love for China. It's one of the most wonderful and important Olympic Games of all.
China looks like a chicken in map, because there are two islands looks like a chicken's feet, two islands one is named Hainan, t
China is one of the biggest countries in the world.It has an area of nearly 9.6 million square kilometres. So it is the third biggest country in the world. To the east is the Pacific Ocean. The Indian Ocean is to the south.
China is divided into thirty-two provinces and two special provinces, one is called HongKong, the other is called Mocow, and we can say proudly that HongHong is one of the most rapidly deceloping cities of China even in the world.
The capital of China is Beijing, it is one of the most famous ancient sivilization cities of China. It is a modern city, too. Has been held the 29th Olympic Games at 2008 successful. The foreigners spoke highly of this Olympic Games and a large number of people had felt a particular love for China. It's one of the most wonderful and important Olympic Games of all.
China looks like a chicken in map, because there are two islands looks like a chicken's feet, two islands one is named Hainan, t
很好！写得不错！下面几点意见供参考：
1. Has been held the 29th Olympic Games at 2008 successful，改为：It has held the 29th Olympic Games in 2008 successfully.
2.had felt a particular love for China好像没有这样表达法，看这样行不行：have a particular love for China。（have love for。。。 热爱。。。）
3. because there are two islands looks like a chicken's feet,应改为because there are two islands that look like a chicken's feet.
4.two islands one is named Hainan...应改为：One lsland is called Hainan...
5.both Hainan island and Taiwan island is in the south of China的系动词is改为are
6.The climate here is...的here改为 there
7.Mohe, a small city in Heilongjiang province...的Mohe前需加in。
8。near by Russia中的by 要省去。