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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/09 05:00:53
With the rapid development of nation, the electronic equipment system is widely adopted. The shielding protection problem against electromagnetic interference receives a great deal of attention. Shielding can not only restrain the radiation interference, but also have an obvious restraining effect on the electrostatic interference, the inductance coupling and capacitance coupling of interference.
The ELF magnetic fields generated by various electrical components may cause disturbances to nearby electronic apparatus and even affect human health. Recently, the topic especially on health of the human body has attracted more interests in social and industrial areas as international regulation on such stray fields is strengthened. Intensive research has been made to date in order to mitigate the effects of the fields around power systems. However, we are still far from a satisfactory solution. Since a lot of stray field sources exist very close to residential areas, these issues have

recieves -- catches 抓住某人眼球/吸引某人注意 catch ...attention

electrostatic interference both in the inductance coupling and capacitance coupling .

on the health of human body 特指人体的健康 加定冠词the

Intensive research has been made to date 想表达“迄今为止所深入的研究”??

However, there is a long way to achieve a satisfactory solution.

最后一句有问题 只是不知道那个领域的知识且没看过你的原文 所以也不好改

Intensive research that has been made so far is to mitigate the effects of the fields around power systems. 这样比较好

其他都基本没错 里面还有一些句子句型用的很好噢。。。