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Christmas Day is coming. I will prepare many things for my family.My mother likes playing the violin.I will give her watched CD. My father likes read books. I will give him read sciences about science. My little brother likes fly kites. I will give him flying kites. And I also give myself a present.It's water flower. Because I like planting.
Christmas Day will come soon.
I will buy CD for her.
My father likes reading books.I will take some magazines of science to him.
My little brother like flying kites,I will buy beautiful kite for him.
And I also buy a present for me.It's a vase.
Christmas Day is coming. I will prepare many things for my family.My mother likes playing the violin.I will give her some CDs. My father likes reading books. I will read science books for him . My little brother likes flying kites. I will fly kites with him . And I also give myself a present.It's water flower. Because I like planting.
I will prepare many things for my family既然都准备了那应该是完成时I have prepared many things for my family。My father likes read books注意这里也应该用like doing sth。所以应该是My father likes reading books。下面的My little brother likes fly kites也应该改成My little brother likes flying kites。还有I will give him flying kites.这句是什么意思？你想表达什么？是想给一个风筝吗？那应该是I'll give him a big kite to