UC知道英语作文修改，高手请进
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Choosing a right career is regarded as a turning point in our life. It is so crucial that we cannot afford to make a simple mistake. However, it is not easy for us to find a satisfying job. From my own perspective, when we seek a job, the following factors should be taken into consideration.
Nothing seems more important than the salary. Most people will be married and have their own children. Consequently, they need a stable and reliable income because of their family responsibilities even if they are not satisfied with their job. In addition, to live a more comfortable life is a human nature. All of these need a certain amount of money.
Another considerable factor is the opportunities of promotion. To most people, working is the chance to show their talents. A higher position means a larger stage to perform one’s best. What is more, people who are in the higher position will generally get a higher salary. As a result, people commonly prefer the job which has lots
Nothing seems more important than the salary. Most people will be married and have their own children. Consequently, they need a stable and reliable income because of their family responsibilities even if they are not satisfied with their job. In addition, to live a more comfortable life is a human nature. All of these need a certain amount of money.
Another considerable factor is the opportunities of promotion. To most people, working is the chance to show their talents. A higher position means a larger stage to perform one’s best. What is more, people who are in the higher position will generally get a higher salary. As a result, people commonly prefer the job which has lots
Nothing seems more important than the salary 应该改成seems to be……
Most people will be married 直接就是will marry 要好些
they need a stable and reliable income 不要a income不可数
is a human nature 应该是 human's
To most people 应该是For吧
talents 是talent吧，不可数
perform one’s best 改成perform oneself best 更好些
总的来说你写的不错，很有水平，单复数的问题还要注意，用的有点乱