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I had a summer holiday from Jule to September.I was very happy ,because I could do many kinds of things.

I went to the beach and I swam in the sea.I called my friend and played with them.I visited my grandparents and ate much delicious food.

Then I went to the zoo whit my sister.I was very happy.Because I saw a lot of animals.They were very lovable.So I took photos of all kinds of animals.I loved the butterfly best.They were colourful and beautiful.My sister liked it too.

In summer holiday,I went to the places where the sun shines brightly.I went to where the see is blue too.All students had a happy summer holiday.
问题:
How long was the summer holiday?
2months.
what was my favourite animals?
Butterfly.

第一句话 Juny 不是June。
第二段 friend改成friends，因为你后面写的是them
第三段 whit写错了是with。
第四段 I went to where the see is blue too. 这句话定语从句没有先行词。
see应该是sea吧。应该改成I went to the place where the sea is blue

都是对的

第一句from Jule to September应该是from July to September，拼写错误。July，七月。
第二段，应该是I called my （friends） and played with them.注意前后单复数一致。
第三段，with拼错了。还有I loved the butterfly best.They were colourful and beautiful.My sister liked it too. 这几句，butterfly要么都是单数，要么都是负数，要统一。butterfly复数是butterflies
第四段，I went to where the see is blue too.这句语法错误，where是副词，前面不加to，还有，sea（海）拼错了。
问题里也是单复数问题，第二个问题应该是what was my favourite animal？去掉s就对了。

有问题：
I had a summer holiday from Jule（应为June或July） to September.I was very happy ,because I could do many kinds of things.

I went to the beach and I swam in the sea.I called my friend (friends)and played with them.I visited my grandparents and ate much delicious food.

Then I went to the zoo whit(with) my si