帮忙看看这篇英语哪些错了？在线等

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/05 08:21:56
As everyone knows,English is very important today.It has been used everywhere in the world. If we can speak English well,we will have more chance to succeed.BecausE nglish is very prevalence now.
I love English,it gives me a colorful dream.I hope I can travel around the world one day. With my good English, I can make friends with many people from different contries.I think it is very interesting .
And do you konw?
If you want to be loved, you should learn to love and be lovable. So I believe as I love English everyday , it will love me too.
SO I believe one day , I can speak English very well

第二行，to be successful

one day 改成some day吧

倒数第二段，learn how to love and how to be loved

So I believe if I love……

最后最好改成，I think I can speak English well in the future，不重复

It has been to used everywhere in the world. If we can speak English well,we will have more chance to succeed.BecausE nglish is very prevalence now.
it gives us a colorful dream

we will have more chance to succeed~~~`改成 TO BE SUCCESSFUL
整个文章只能说是一般~~~

语法什么的没有问题 不过你用了太多的重复词语 像believe every…… can 等等
你可以用think could 等词语代替 虽然意思一样 但评分应该会相对高一点

第三行的prevalence改成prevalently
我觉得倒数第三行可以写成you shonld learn how to love and be.....

more chances

prevalence n. 应变为prevalent adj.
I love English because it gives me a colorful dream.不可用逗号连接两个独立的句子。
I hope I can travel around the world some day.特指未来的某一天
And do you konw if you want to be loved, you should learn to love and be lovable. So I believe as I love Eng