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my dailylife has changed a lot in the last few years,many things are different and i used to like different things when i was a child.first of all,i used to have so much time to play games and watch tv when i was study in primary school,but now i just don't have the time anymore.instead,i have to do more homework,take more notes and sleep less.and i used to be afraid of being alone,but i like staying at home alone now,because i believe i can make up happy by myself.i also uesd to like eating junk food,because i think it's very delicious,but now i realized it's bad for my health,so i don't like them anymore.i really miss the old days,because when i was young,i used to have the children's day,and i can go out with my parents on this day.but now it's necessary for us to hard-working,we can't go out with our parents or play games with friends on many holidays.tomorrow is another day,we should try our best to change ourselves,love life and believe----no pain,no g

make up happy ?
and i can go out -could
hard-working- work hard

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My daily life has changed a lot in the last few years,many things are different . I used to like different things when I was a child.First of all,I used to have so much time to play games and watch TV when I was studying in primary school,but now I just don't have the time anymore.Instead,I have to do more homework,take more notes and sleep less. I used to be afraid of being alone,but I like staying at home alone now,because I believe I can make it happy by myself.Also, I uesd to like eating junk food,because I think it's very delicious.But now I realized that it's bad for my health,so I don't like them anymore.I really miss the old days,because when I was young,I had Children's day,and I can go out with my parents on that day.But now it's necessary for us to work hard ,so we can't go out with our parents or play games with frie