请帮忙改一下初二英语作文

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I want to be an interpreter.It's interesting,it is my dream.I have been studying English for six years.I started studying English because I am interested in English,and I want to travel the world.I like best about studying English is listening to some English songs.

I want to be an interpreter.It's interesting,it is my dream.I have been studying English for six years.I started learning English because I am interested in English,and I want to travel around the world.I like the best thing to study English is listening to some English songs.

凭感觉改的 反正最后一句话怎么看怎么别扭 肯定不对 稍微改动了一点 没大问题

I want to be an interpreter.Because it's interesting and it is my dream.I have been studying English for six years.I started studying English because I am interested in English,and I want to travel around the world.I like studying English best, It is because i prefer to listen to some English songs.

语法上没什么大的错误,只是有的地方不连贯,总体来说还可以

我觉得这篇文章挺好你就继续写下去吧

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