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Peace cannot be achieved through violence,it can be attained through understanding.

I agree with this concept. In today's society, the world has more than six billions people. Each person has different idea, however, we can not listen to every body's idea, so the world always has violence and war. I think education is the best way to stop the war, because the world has many races, and they have different cultureS. Education can make theM have some same ideas. they can understand the war is too serious to our liveS, and they can really understand love and family are more important than war, then the world will has a long peace. Understanding can make people learn how to respect each other. Understanding also can make people solve problem through communication. Understanding can lead us to find our real life.

Each person has different idea---ideas

and they have different culture---cultures

Education can make