哪位可以帮忙看一下有没有语法错误

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My name is baoyu,就是在天气预报中经常听到的那个暴雨，I graduated from jiaxiang NO.1 middle school.As you can see Iam a gril,A cheerful,optimic,and positive gril.I choose this because I like laguages,I hope I can say the same as the others in multiple languages,I believe通过我的努力可以达到这个目标，希望老师能够认可我。

哪位大哥大姐可以帮忙看一下啊，我明天要去面试，还有，请帮我把没有用汉语写的地方补充一下、、谢谢啦

cheerful—unclouded 开朗的
optimic —optimistic 乐观的
languages—language 语言 如果你要表名你喜欢各种各样的语言 还可以改成 various language
I hope I can say the same as the others in multiple languages-
I hope I can communicate with others in all kinds of language fluently
just like others .

通过我的努力可以达到这个目标，希望老师能够认可我。
I can achieve my goal through my effort and i also hope teachers would acknowlege me!

My name is baoyu, the words you often heard in the weather forecast ，I graduated from jiaxiang NO.1 middle school.As you can see I am a gril,A cheerful,optimic,and positive gril.I choose this because I like language,I hope I can say the same as the others in multiple languages,I believe i can achieve this goal through my efforts ，i hope you teachers recognize me ,thank you !

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