请问这个英语句子有不有语法错误

问题只出在something mistake上，改为some mistakes或a mistake即可。 中间的as不但没错，相反是一个很好的从句。 now has ebbed away一定要放最后，三楼的没理解句子，人家as不是说的原因。

something mistake-something wrong/ some mistakes

用英文讲就是sentence structure,句子结构, 句法。 应该把now has ebbed away， 然后讲原因，as the punishment awaited you if you made some mistakes, 不是something mistake, 是some mistakes.

希望能帮到你。

as是错的，删除。