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Dear teacher
Thank you very much for helping me. I was having a hard time studing my project until you gave a hand to me. You let me have more interested in studying knowledge. You often encourage me to face the problems. You often talk with me when I'm in trouble ,but sometimes you are too strict to me .I know you want me to do better. Thanks again for all what you have done for me.
Yours.....

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Dear teacher
Thank you very much for helping me. I was having a hard time studying my project before you gave a hand to me. You make me have more interest in learning knowledge. You often encourage me to face the problems. You usually talk with me when I'm in trouble .But sometimes you are very strict with me thought I know you want to see me do better. Thanks again for all what you have done for me.
Yours<