短文改错，好者追分

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/22 14:55:33
While some reforms focus on government and public behavior others looked at the cities as a whole.Civic leaders,convincing that physical enviornment influenced human behavior,argued that cities should develop master plans to guide their future growth and development.City planning was nothing new,however the rapid industriation and urban growth of the late nineteenth century took place without any consideration for order.Urban renewal in the twentieth century followed several courses.Some cities introduced plans to completely rebuild the city core.Another cities contented themselves with zoning plans for regulating future growth.Certain parts of town were restricted residential use,while others were set aside for industrial of commercial development.共有五个错

1，some reforms focus 改为 some reforms focused （因为这个句子的主句用的是过去时，原则上while引起的从句其主从句时态应该一致，结合本文普遍使用的过去时，所以判断是从句的时态有误。）
2，industriation 改为 industrialisation（英式英语） 或 industrialization（美式英语）。
3，Another cities 改为 other cities
4，were restricted residential use 改为 were restricted to residential use（restrict to = 把…限制〔控制, 保持〕在…）
5，aside for industrial 改为 aside for industry