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Good morning everyone. The book I choose to present to you is called “Black Water” by Eve Bunting. This novel is about a tragedy that involving moral, honesty and also about the strong love within a family that was supported behind all along.
This story was caused of jealousy and the views between teenagers, the decisions made of whether tell or cover the truth. The author represents the character’s struggling thoughts due to self and outside pressures.

It was written in the modern time and is telling in first person, a 13 years old teenager called Brodie. It is set at River town, the case of draught and death was happened at the Black River which flows through the town. The main characters are Brodie, both of his parents, his cousin Jack, Otis, Pauline and Raoul the police.
The story was present in a linear structure, the genre of this book is Realistic Fiction, it showed the different personalities of people and the way they solve problems. The author writes the

1. This novel is about a tragedy that involving moral, honesty and also about the strong love within a family that was supported behind all along.
invovling改成involves 或者把that删除 定语从句要么是现在分词

2. This story was caused of jealousy and the views between teenagers, the decisions made of whether tell or cover the truth. The author represents the character’s struggling thoughts due to self and outside pressures.
改成 This story was caused by jealousy, different views between teenagers and the decisions made whether tell or cover the truth. The author presents the character's struggling thoughts due to self and outside pressures.

3. It was written in the modern time and is telling in first person, a 13 years old teenager called Brodie. It is set at River town, the case of draught and death was happened at the Black River which flows through the town.
改成It was written in the modern time and is told in first person, a 13 years old teenager called Brodie.