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i'm a sunny girl who enjoy making friends.
hope we can share our interests and hobbies together

Sunny and cheerful,I like making friends. You can share your interests with me.本身hobby interest就是一个意思兴趣啊 业余爱好啥的 就不用重复了吧

I am a sunny girl and I'd like to make friends. You can share your hobbies and interests with me.