英文找错,拜托拉。呜呜.............

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/04 09:07:27
拜托,拜托,如果回答好,有酬劳。进行一下改动拉,让它更加通俗易懂。

Although the afternoon, the library is still filled with people. Hard to find seats, just have to sit down and have a middle-aged men the first to sit down immediately. I am about to remind him that up he said. I am very angry. I angrily pointed at him, and loudly said: "This is first of all, I found the seats, you then go to another seat!" People around here have to Peak. All of a sudden my face is red. I saw a middle-aged men, then went on.
Although the afternoon, the library is still filled with people. Hard to find seats, just have to sit down and suddenly there is a middle-aged men the first to sit down immediately. I am about to remind him that up he said. I am very angry. I angrily pointed at him, and loudly said: "This is first of all, I found the seats, you then go to another seat!" People around here have to Peak. All of a sudden my face is red. I saw a middle-aged men, then went on.

要不要改成过去时的啊?我改了,如果不要你可以改回去~
Although it was in the afternon,the library was still full of people.It's hard to find a seat but suddenly I caught sight of an empty seat.I was about to take it when a middle-aged man immediately sat down.I wanted to remind him to leave but he said(这里是不是少了什么?).I angrily pointed at him and said aloud,"I find the seat first so you should go to another seat!"People around us here all stood up instantly.All of a sudden my face turned red.I felt so embarrassed and quickly went away.
呃,我没搞清楚结尾大概表达什么意思诶~~就这样写下,不知道会不会有错。

可以HI我,我帮你修改,说实话中间有几句很乱,不大懂意思- -