英文日记——找错

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英文日记——找错
第一次自己试着用英文写东西,大侠们来帮忙找错,替我修改修改啊!

I come from Anqing,a beautiful city.Anqing is the country of Huangmei Opera.

My father is a worker, the mother is a farmer.Their diligence and docile, and I am a person.
I work very hard, but sometimes some anxious motion. I have already been aware of this problem, will improve in laterly of the work.
我来自安庆,一个美丽的城市。安庆是黄梅戏之乡。
我的父亲是个工人,母亲是个农民。他们勤劳而善良,教会我做人。
我工作十分努力,但有时候有些急躁情绪。我已经认识到这个问题,我将在今后的工作中改进。

呵呵,写的很简单,我就是从简单出发,慢慢开始!大家不要见笑啊!

I come from Anqing,a beautiful city. Anqing is the country of Huangmei Opera.
你前面说安庆是个城市``后面说那是个国家```到底是城市还是国家```我明白你问什么这么写``呵呵``你查中文字典"country"说的是“乡”但是理解起来不这么理解```我们中国人认为乡是任何一个地方``但是其实她的是一个领土/国家来讲
改:I come from Anqing, a beautiful city, where it is famous for its Huangmei Opera.

My father is a worker, the mother is a farmer.
"the mother"谁的mother```记住`英文是很specific的
改:My father is a worker and my mother is a farmer. (不用加逗号``很短的一个句子)

Their diligence and docile(择词不当), and I am a person.
改:Their diligence and gentle nature lead me on the path of being a righteous man.

I work very hard, but sometimes some anxious motion.
改:I work very hard but sometimes I do get a little anxious over things.

I have already been aware of this problem, will improve in laterly of the work.
改:I am already aware of this problem, and I will try to improve this in my future work.

恩```在你的diary里```我可以清楚