UC知道一片课后练习，要写个短文，刚学，初写。错少不了。麻烦给看看，最好能多说下为何错了，谢谢！
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Good morning!
I have just come back my home.
I had a good time for these days in Australia. Stay with you was very happy. Thank for your entertain. This is my first came to Australia, so many this is curious a lot and I very like your meals. To tell you the true, even i eat more than at home. Haw-haw! You cooking is the best in I know people. Especially it's that lobster, it's very delicious! I wish I could taste your dish, even it's only a bite. Thanks for your care again!
Now I am listening music that you send me and I am writing this letter to you. The music is good too.
Though we can't often meet, but we can keep connecting by E-mail.
Finally, If you get change, welcome to you come to china. Your coming is welcome by anytime.
Yours PingLi
衷心的感谢所有的朋友，谢谢你们。
看了大家的解答。偶又一次知道偶很次。。。
很对不起大家，大部分错，完全是自己马虎造成的。打完了，没仔细检查。比如拼写错误太不应该了。
我觉得很抱歉，大家
Hello paul! （paul要改为大写的Paul)
Good morning!
I have just come back my home. （这里改为I've的话语言读起来会更顺畅一点）
I had a good time for these days in Australia(改为I stayed in Australia three days and I had a good time there[had a good time 也可以说成enyoy myself]). Stay with you was very happy(这个句话的正确说法应该是Staying with you were very happy,因为with是介词，因该跟动名词或名词). Thank(改为Thanks或Thank you) for your entertain(entertain应该写成entertainment，因为for后面只能跟名词或动名词）. This is my first came to Australia so many this is curious a lot and I very like your meals.（这句话是不是想说对很多事情都感兴趣？如果是的话，就该改为：so I was curious to know a lot of things."and I very like your meals这句话应该另起一段）。
I liked your meanls very much.To tell you the true(true改为truth,因为这里应该用名词）, even i eat more than at home. Haw-haw! You cooking is the best in I know people(正确说法是You are the best one in cooking that the people I knew). Especially it's that lobster(it's that 去掉）, it's very delicious（因为这件事情已经发生了，所以应该说tha