10个句子,帮我检查下语法错误,谢谢!

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1. The bagger’s story is very pitiful, but it still cannot take my attention.
2. I visited my colleague because he helped me last week.
3. The house’s foundation is unsteady, but nobody care about that.
4. Omar doesn’t believe in the existence of God, but I believe.
5. Steve’ father who is a very famous writer has good affect to him.
6. We should back to our shelter because the old folk will help us.
7. The seriate case which made the policeman very angry was made by the same person.
8. Omar can conscious that his friends are very kindly because they give the money to the bagger.
9. Nobody has sympathy with Fascist because they brought the calamity to human being.
10. I didn’t have enough preparation for the exam because I was busy last night.

1.应该用过去式比较好
2.应该是he had helped.. 过去的过去,用过去完成时
3.cares nobody视为单数
4.这句ok
5.开头应该是Steve's father不过我想可能是你漏打了吧.后半句也不对,affect
是动词,比较好的说法是...affect him a great deal. 前面没有has
6.应该是We should go back to...少了个动词,后面的will应该是would
7.ok
8.can后面需要加一个动词的,而conscious是形容词.可以改成Omar knows that...如果你想说的意思是"Omar非常清楚..."的意思,你可以说Omar is keenly aware that...
9.前后时态不一致,has应该用had."the calamity"没有上下文的话最好用"calamities"
10.ok