英文推荐信求修改

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中文原文,
我是***大学经济与管理系教授,教研室主任***。本人作为***同学的专业课及毕业论文的指导老师,为该生讲授<<管理学>>专业课,指导其完成学士毕业论文。
在大学期间,该生学习相当认真,有较强的求知欲。在课堂做案例分析的时候,该生积极主动,严谨认真,特别是在分析百事可乐的市场竞争战略问题时,他利用课余时间上图书馆查找相关资料,制成统计表格,然后制作成幻灯片,在课堂上发表,分析得相当专业。他严谨认真的学习态度,给我留下了深刻的印象。***同学自学能力强,学校放暑假都在学校图书馆学习,四年大学期间,他不仅在专业课学习方面取得好成绩,成绩一直排在班上前5名,连续三年获得奖学金,而且英语水平也很高,在大学二年级的时候就通过了大学英语六级考试,在我所带的男学生中很少见

英文初译版,求校对
I am ***, director of Department of Teaching and Research Office,the professor of Department of Economics and Management,Wuhan Technology University , as a teacher of guiding the main courses and thesis to the ***,I teach <<Management>> courses to him, guide the completion of degree theses.
During the time of the university, the student study very seriously and have a strong thirst for knowledge. When we do the Case studies in the classroom ,he pro-active and thoroughness, particularly in the analysis of competition in the market strategy of Pepsi-Cola, he goes to the library afte

During the time of the university--during his stay in university.

the student study --the student studied

have a strong thirst for --had a strond desire for

he pro-active and thoroughness--he was very active and serious

relevant information into statistical tables- relevant information and make diagrams of it

he not only makes learning courses good results before in class 5,-he not only keeps in the top five

In my more than 20 years of teaching I see this kind of male students very rarely -- in my more than 20 years of teaching life, i rarely counter this kind of male students.

武汉理工大学的教授就这英语水平?真让人对学生质量捏把汗。问题太多,分太少。