中译英：生活应该要像棒棒糖一样甜蜜，像花儿一样灿烂。

我的翻译是：Life should be sweety like sugar, and bright like flowers.

你的翻译我觉得太中国化了。

Life should be as sweet as a lollipop, as bright as flowers.

The life should be like candy stick similar and sweet, be like flower similar brilliant

Life should like sweet sugars ,like beautiful flowers .