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I'm a child who prefer to look at sky when feel lonely,looking the large sun or the large moon,tilling the neck feeling hurt,tears filling the eyes.

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I'm a child who look upon the sky when being alone.
Watching the grand sun and the moon.
Till the pain and ache come to me neck.
Till the the tear fill in the eyes of my own.
总觉得很美，就押了个尾韵，不知道好不好，用词很简单，欢迎帮忙改正。

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I'm the kind of child who will look up to the sky when feeling lonely. Staring at the big sun and the big moon, until I have a sore neck and eyes filled with tears.

i am a girl/boy who will look up into the sky when i am lonely.i will keep staring at the big sun or the moon till my neck is sore and my eyes are filled with tears.

I am a very lonely at the time, children will look up to the sky, watching the sun, the moon that big. Waiting till the neck pain, waiting till the tears overflow the eyes of

望支持~~~新手！

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