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1。Because of the internet’s popularity in the 21th century, we often take our books for granted. But do you ever think if it weren’t so easy to find a copy of your favourite book? What if the printing press haven’t been invented? Well, there might never have been a Renaissance and we probably won’t have the technology that we are having right now!
2。Before the invention of the printing press, books had to be written by hand and were usually owned by the rich or by large organizations such as the church. But after Johann Gutenberg invented the printing press in the fifteenth century, the rarity of books dropped sharply. After the spread of information and technology came the spread of ideas. The Renaissance could never have occurred without being able to print ideas and spread them to the world.
3。Even though the printing did exist before Gutenberg’s time, he stood apart from the previous machines by allowing for much faster printing, which led to the rapid

1。Because of the Internet’s popularity in the 21th century, we often take our books for granted. However, have you ever thought if it isn't so easy to find a copy of your favourite book? (此句用完成时;没有必要虚拟)What if the printing press hasn't been invented? (have-has,建议用一半现在时就行了,阐述一个事实,hasn't been -isn't)Well, there may never have been a Renaissance and we probably won’t have the technology that we are having right now!
2。Before the invention of the printing press, books had to be written by hand and were usually owned by the rich or by large organizations ,for example, the church.(这样改,停顿较好) But after Johann Gutenberg invented the printing press in the fifteenth century, the rarity of books dropped sharply. The spread of information and technology resulted in the spread of ideas.(不需要加连词after,came-resulted in 导致) The Renaissance could never have occurred without being able to print ideas and spread them to the world.
3。Even though the printing did exist before Gute