英语,大家帮我看看有没有什么语法错误的!

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The change in my hometown
In the past,people’s living conditions were poor.Most people lived in a low house.And the house is small and dark.people planted crops with the help of farm animals.They still reap crops by hand.Children study in a old school.
With the development of China,all those things change.Nowadays,people have lived in a tall building.They plant crops with the help of machines.Children can also get a good education in a modern school.

大家帮我看看有没有什么语法错误的!后天要上台演讲!

And the house is small and dark----is 改was

study in --studied in

all those things change改成all those things have changed更好

in a old school--in an old school

Nowadays,people have lived in ---Nowadays,people are living in感觉更顺吧

基本上词语使用没什么问题,但是如果表达更多样化会更好哦

Children study in a old school
study改为studied

all those things change
those改为these change改为have changed

people have lived in a tall
have lived 改为live

Children can also get a good education in a modern school.
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In the past,people’s living condition was poor.Most people lived in the low houses.The houses were small and dark.People planted crops with the help of farm animals.They still had to reap crops by hand.Children studied in an old school.
With the development of China,all those things changed.Nowadays,people live in the tall buildings.They plant crops with the help of machines.Children can al