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I am going to be a writer in 10 years.
I is busy every day.
I get up at 11:00a.m..Naturally,my eat lunch at the restaurant.
I always write in front of the computer,but also a jug of coffe on the table.
I usually go to bed late everday 1a.m..
But i like the job very much,because it daesn't effect my study.And i likes writing ,too.Because it's creative .
I will become an excellent writer.
I will fight hard for it.
实在惭愧啊^^^这是我第一次自己写英语作文啊!望大家把问题多多的指出来.在下定当感激不禁!本人可是小学生啊!!!

I AM busy every day.
I get up at 11:00am...OF COURSE, I have lunch at the restaurant.
I always write in front of A compter, WITH a jug of coffee on the table.
I go to bed late every day, at about 1am
But I like the job very much, because it doesn't AFFECT my SCHOOL WORK. And I like writing, too, because it's creative work.
I will become an excellent writer.
I will fight for it.

I am going to be a writer in 10 years.
I am busy every day.
I get up at 11:00am...OF COURSE, I have lunch at the restaurant.
I always write in front of A compter, WITH a jug of coffee on the table.
I go to bed late every day, at about 1am
But I like the job very much, because it doesn't AFFECT my SCHOOL WORK. And I like writing, too, because it's creative work.
I will become an excellent writer.
I will fight for it.

这就对了 (手痛)

第二行应该是I am busy every day.I eat lunch in restaurant.
I always write