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Believe in yourself
Many people don’t believe in themselves, they always think they are very bad. In fact, they only see the place of others better than theirs.
Once, when I learned how to play the guitar, there was a sister, she played the guitar very well, she accepted the things of teacher taught to her very quickly, so she could learn more than us. I was very eager to do well in everything, she gave me a big hit, and so I felt very sad. I decided to protect hard. I didn’t stop protect until my fingernails became red and swollen. Though that, I still didn’t make grate progress.
The sister heard my things. She came and let me looked at her hands. I was very surprised because of the many cocoons of her hands. She toll me she has learned guitar for long, when she stated to play, she was worse than other children, but her love for guitar was more than others. She protected to play guitar day and night, so she gets this reason now. I looked at my hands, there was no cocoon

They always think *that they are very bad 或 the worst of themselves*.
*When I was learning* to play the guitar, *there was a girl*, *who* played the guitar very well.
She *took in* the things that teachers taught * her very quickly, so she * learned more than us.
I was very eager to do well in everything, *however* she gave me a big hit, and so I felt very sad.
I didn’t stop *protecting* until my fingernails became red and swollen.
*Even then*, I still didn’t make *great* progress.
I was very surprised because of the many cocoons *on* her hands.
She *told* me she has learned guitar for *a long time*, and when she stated to play, she was worse than *the* other children, but her love for guitar was more than others.
She protected to play guitar day and night, so she *understands my reason*.

我没有看懂protect是什么,你是不是想说practise是练习。

Very good!

" decided to protect hard. I didn’t stop protect until my fingernails became r