修改一篇英语日记

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Yesterday,I washed clothes.Formerly,I think is very easy.But I think it is too difficult.
I'm washed my socks and shirt.And I was exert myself too long time.But they were dirty,too.And my mother washed three pants.They were clean,I scrubed my socks again."Oh,they were clean!"I said.
Wash clothes is difficult!

Yesterday,I was washing my clothes.At first ,I thought it was easy.But I was wrong.
I was washing my socks and shirt.And I did so long a time.But they were still very dirty.but my mother washed three pants.They were clean after washing ,I scrubed my socks again."Oh,they were clean!"I said.
Wash clothes is difficult!this is my opnoin now .

Formerly改为Originally

I'm washed my socks and shirt改为I washes my socks and shirts.

too long timeg改为 to a long time

Wash clothes is difficult!改为Washing clothes is difficult

Yesterday,I washed clothes.Formerly,I (thought) (it) is very easy.But I think it is too difficult (now).
I'm washed my socks and shirt(s).And I was exert(ing) myself too long time.But they were dirty,too.And my mother washed three pants.They were clean,I scrubed my socks again."Oh,they (are) clean!"I said.
Wash(ing) clothes is difficult!

Yesterday, I washed my clothes. Formerl