有没有英语高手进来帮忙？

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/24 04:21:41
这是我朋友写的英文自我介绍，她让我帮她改，但我也是个英语菜鸟，所以在此求助与各位精通英语的侠士相救～

Hello, everyone, my Chinese name is 悠扬 , my English name is Yolanda.
大家好 我的中文名字是悠扬 我的英文名字是Yolanda
I come from a small town which locates the northwest backland in China.
我来自中国西北部边陲的一个小镇
Although there have no big city City prosperous
虽然那里没有大城市的繁华
I still love my home town
但是我依然爱我的家乡
Various beauty had simple local customs and spread the side of Western Regions to fill there legend,
那里有淳朴的风土人情，还流传着西域边塞特有的神话传说。
I hope everyones can like with understand my home town.
我希望大家都能喜欢和了解我的家乡
My personality is bright, loving literature
我性格开朗、热爱文学
The 鲁迅 Sir's style of writing is most adoring with patriotic spirit
最崇拜的是鲁迅先生的文笔和爱国精神
What to appreciate most is the sharp speech of韩寒with original angle of view
最崇拜的是韩寒犀利言语和独特视角。
I have no special features, although once learned the ballet, piano and the calligraphy in c

I come from a small town which locates the northwest backland in China.
应该在locates 后面加个介词at

Although there have no big city City prosperous
改成:no big prosperous city

那里有淳朴的风土人情，还流传着西域边塞特有的神话传说
People there have simple local customs and spread the special Western Regions legends and mythos.

I hope everyones can like with understand my home town. 改为:I hope everyone will understand and then like my hometown.

My personality is bright, loving literature 改为:My personality is bright,and I love literature.

The 鲁迅 Sir's style of writing is most adoring with patriotic spirit .改为:I like Mr. LuXun's style of wrinting and his patriotic spirit most.

What to appreciate most is the sharp speech of韩寒with original angle of view.改为:What I appreciate most is HanHan's sharp speech and original angle of view.

I have no special features, although once learned the ballet, piano and the calligraphy in ch