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I recommend that prisoners should be allowed to take courses because it can prepare them life after prison, give prisoners some ways to pass the time, and reduce crime in prison and after jail.

First, when many prisoners get out of jail, they lost their confidence and don’t want to go outside talk with people or find a job. On the other hand, taking courses in the jail can prepare prisoners life after jail, make their future life easier. According to a true story form Chinese website “a Chinese boy’s family extremely poverty, and can’t offer his university tuition fees. He was pressured by his uncle to rob people. He regretted to do that. Because the Chinese prison has college course, he decided to take this course in the jail. Also, he wants to apply post-graduate course after prison” (College courses in Chinese prison) The boy doesn’t want to give up his life, he still wants to catch his dream. This is a very good example to show prisoners won’t be forgotten by the society

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