会写佳句和名言的人进来!

Dan Farmer is a computer programmer with a gold ring in his eyebrow, a curly shock of orange hair
(a shock of hair：一堆蓬乱的头发)

A shy smile rippled nervously over his features.
害羞的笑容在他的面容上紧张的荡漾开来

Between those red cheeks and that white forehead a pair of small black eyes well suited to strike terror into the bravest heart. （这一句话描写的是人物的外貌，主要是脸部表情。在描写脸部表情时又着意描写了那双可怕的小眼睛，这 双小眼睛可以吓怕最大胆的人。为把这双眼睛描写的活龙活现，把人物刻划得入木三分，作者运用了有标记主 位性前置，形象自然、生动有力。）

有我写的有查来的，希望对你有用
--Will
回答者：psdjonly1 - 见习魔法师 二级 4-18 00:19

1"He was tall, but exceedingly lank, with narrow shoulders, long arms and legs, hands that dangled a mile out of his sleeves, feet that might have served for shovels, and his whole frame most loosely hung together. His head was small, and flat at top, with huge ears, large green glassy eyes, and a long snip nose, so that it looked like a weathercock perched upon his spindle neck, to tell which way the wind blew."