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塞翁失马的读后感
I believe in good and bad luck. As I win mark six, it is appear to be a lottery. But for me it just seems as transient and ephemeral as a fleeting cloud an unimportant matter. Whatever my mum uauslly tell me don’t be silly to belief that unsafe
I think the character are lucky of the story. because their experience were good since to begin with the end. The man lost a fine horse at the time, but he did not disappointed. he appear to be stared through the open windows at the clouds scuttling past the sun. Good luck back, and black luck come. We should have a greatful heart. Take a sample, just like the Financial Tsunami, all of people face to be out of work. Maybe some of them are lost money. Everyone felt fear for Financial Tsunami’s causing social problem. However someone luckly finding a job or start a business in a Slow Economy. So when we meet with poor news, we should not be discouraged. Perhaps, bad thing turn to good thing.
我相信好运与恶运, 就像我赢得六合彩(
I believe in good and bad luck. As I win mark six, it is appear to be a lottery. But for me it just seems as transient and ephemeral as a fleeting cloud an unimportant matter. Whatever my mum uauslly tell me don’t be silly to belief that unsafe
I think the character are lucky of the story. because their experience were good since to begin with the end. The man lost a fine horse at the time, but he did not disappointed. he appear to be stared through the open windows at the clouds scuttling past the sun. Good luck back, and black luck come. We should have a greatful heart. Take a sample, just like the Financial Tsunami, all of people face to be out of work. Maybe some of them are lost money. Everyone felt fear for Financial Tsunami’s causing social problem. However someone luckly finding a job or start a business in a Slow Economy. So when we meet with poor news, we should not be discouraged. Perhaps, bad thing turn to good thing.
我相信好运与恶运, 就像我赢得六合彩(
it is appear to be a lottery明显的病句嘛！
because their experience were good since to begin with the end还是病句！
but he did not disappointed同上！
he appear to be stared through the open windows at the clouds scuttling past the su又来了！
Good luck back你自己发明的句子？
Maybe some of them are lost money病句不是一般的多！
However someone luckly finding a job or start a business in a Slow Economy同上！
bad thing turn to good thing.病句！
总的评价下吧，绝对是低分！病句多得惨不忍睹，很多句子貌似是中式英语Good luck back有你这么用的吗?Good luck coming back不行吗？动词的单复数时态的运用都很有问题，建议先写一点简单的作文题，尝试一些范文的结构句式，要写塞翁失马这种比较难写的文章还是多打点草稿比较好！
说的直白，不要见怪！
你能不能提供你这篇文章的中文翻译，这篇作文应该是你自己写的吧！如果你可以提拱原文，我可以尝试着修改，因为，如果仅仅是这样的话，不好修改！
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