UC知道这篇高中英语作文能得几分
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假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1．词数：100左右：
2．参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分25分 寒，这是我在网上找的高考满分作文 不会吧
注意：1．词数：100左右：
2．参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分25分 寒，这是我在网上找的高考满分作文 不会吧
单从语法来看倒是没什么大毛病，但是语句写的很不通顺，而且有些句子中式英语的痕迹太重，有点难以理解
要我给分的话，可能就16分的样子吧~
呵呵~网上的信息太多~鱼目混杂的~所以说的满分作文也未必都是~反正这篇打死我也不信这能得满分
满分25的话应该在16分左右，基本能按意思写出来，但中式英语比较多，几个句子不通顺，我做了些修改，但没法发给你。如果LZ 想要的话留下邮箱地址吧。
最多15分,最少10分
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