UC知道英语人士帮忙看一下有没有语法等方面的错误
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The second term of Senior High One is over , I have improve with my vocabulary , and composition.
At the beginning of the term , I try my best to learn English well , for example:reading English books , writing , and so on . Beside , on the class , I listening carefully and taking notes Details . What’s more , when I have some questions on grammers , I usually ask my classmates for help .
Through I have made progress in vocabulary and reading , I also can not be proud , because I want to work harder on English .
I have learn more and more Knowledges about English , well , I think it is easy to learn if you work hard . I should keep on speaking , reading…
In Senior High two l will spend more time on grammers , so , I will get good marks which can make me happy and make my parents feel satisfy .
帮忙改正一下！！！
The second term of Senior High in Grade One is over , I have improved my vocabulary , and composition.
At the beginning of the term , I tried my best to learn English well, for example:reading English books , writing and so on . Besides , in the class , I listened carefully and took notes in detail . What’s more , when I had some questions on grammers , I usually asked my classmates for help .
Though I have made progress in vocabulary and reading , I can not be proud , because I want to work harder on English .
I have learn more and more Knowledge about English , well , I think it is easy to learn if you work hard . I should keep on speaking , reading…
In my second year, l will spend more time on grammers so I will get good marks which can make me happy and make my parents feel satisfied .
上面是改好的啦！……话说……建议楼主注意一下时态。以后写作文的时候，一般现在时，过去时，这些小时态对动词的处理一定要注意，否则作文要扣很多分的哦！ 加油！
你写的东东在哪
问题很多呀！