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August 23.2009 Sunday Sunny
It is a fine day today.
After the dinner,My mother and I walked at xx road.on the bridge,I saw a little girl climed the guardrail,and I saw a very lovely dog,It was very small I have ever seen.
Today I made a learning program,I must improve my English.
August 24.2009 Monday Sunny
After we had walked,on the way home,I saw a old man in the square,Although he was over seventy years old,He was still active,He danced among a large crowd of young people,He looks very health I though.
I didn't play the violin a few days,Tomorrow I will practice it an hour.
It is a fine day today.
After the dinner,My mother and I walked at xx road.on the bridge,I saw a little girl climed the guardrail,and I saw a very lovely dog,It was very small I have ever seen.
Today I made a learning program,I must improve my English.
August 24.2009 Monday Sunny
After we had walked,on the way home,I saw a old man in the square,Although he was over seventy years old,He was still active,He danced among a large crowd of young people,He looks very health I though.
I didn't play the violin a few days,Tomorrow I will practice it an hour.
August 23.2009 Sunday Sunny
It is a fine day today.
After dinner,my mother and I walked on xx road.On the bridge,I saw a little girl climed the guardrail,and I saw a very lovely dog.It was the smallest dog I have ever seen.
Today I made a learning program.I must improve my English.
August 24.2009 Monday Sunny
When we walked on the way home,I saw a old man in the square.Although he was over seventy years old,he was still active.He danced among a large crowd of young people and he looked very healthy.
I hadn't play the violin for a few days,so tomorrow I will practice it for an hour.
注意一些大小写，标点，连词，不适合的形容词等等。