下面的6句英文，帮我检查下有语法错误没，谢谢拉。高手来！

If I leave home, I'll miss my violin the most because my mom gave it to me as a birthday gift when I was 7 years old. That violin isn't just a present for the close relationship I have with my mom, rather it has a significant influence on my mind. My mom not only gave me a lot of suggestions on how to play violin professionally, but also told me how to appreciate art sincerely. Her conception has helped me overcoming many difficulties and I finally could catch the essence of beauty after putting into my heart. Music has changed my life entirely and I will dedicate all my spirit to the fascinating dream of music.

If I leave home, I will miss most my violin which was my mom given to me as my 7 years old birthday gift. That violin do not just represents a close relationship between mom and me, it also has a significant influence on my mind. My mom gave me a lot of suggestions on how to play violin professionally, and told me how to appreciate art sincerely as well. Her co