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Today is Sunday.My mother decided to go shopping with me. How happy I was ! When we got there ,I noticed it packed with people (挤满了人）。While the crowd was pushing me in all directions ,I missed my mother and I couldn't find her anywhere .I was too frightned to know what to do.Slowly I realized that I should ask somebody for help !So ,I ran to a policeman near the gate .With the help of the kind policeman,I found my dear mother finally. Oh, it's really a breathtaking day.

On sunday,my mother and me were going to go shoping. That day, to my suprise,there were many peple . suddenly, I saw a beautiful dog walking on the street. When I saw him,I lost my mother. Only can I find my mother is to ask the police. At last, with the police hlep,I found my mother. I thanked the police. That day, wo felt very happy.

真的假的,这样也能写作文,聪明!我当初怎么没有想到这样可以得到作文呢?