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afternoon of today ,i going to climbing GuShan.it is more half an hour that i from my home to GuShan.and i used 50 minutes get to the top of mountain and 30 minutes arrive the foot of moutain.
in climing that is few people ,becouse then whether is hot .but i have insist to get to the top of moutain.and i find the bottle water is expensive in there that spending my three RMB.not only water is expensive but also verything is so .
in the top of moutaim there people ofen excise ,if i can do like them,that is very good.i think i may be do. i can*t see far screry in the floor of Look at the scenery .beacouse the sunlight is strong. and there hasn*t very cool breeze.but i am delight becouse can arrive there only in walking Three-quarters of way i have a rest.
in climing that is few people ,becouse then whether is hot .but i have insist to get to the top of moutain.and i find the bottle water is expensive in there that spending my three RMB.not only water is expensive but also verything is so .
in the top of moutaim there people ofen excise ,if i can do like them,that is very good.i think i may be do. i can*t see far screry in the floor of Look at the scenery .beacouse the sunlight is strong. and there hasn*t very cool breeze.but i am delight becouse can arrive there only in walking Three-quarters of way i have a rest.
This afternoon,I was going to climb Gu Mountain.It took me more than half an hour to get the destinition-foot of Gu Mountain.After 50 minutes'walk,I reached the top of mountain.At that moment,I suddenly owned my wide spectrum.
During the trip,I felt that few people who lack perseverance because of the hot weather gave up,on contrary,I persisted going on.Unfortunately,I found almost everything is expensive,even included water,which cost me 3 RMB.
On the high mountain,I saw many people walked around and did exercises what do encouraged me a lot.The scenery below me is glorious,nevertheless/howeverI couldn't see it in a long way,since my
eyes expored to the sunlight and high temperature.But I do had a happy day!