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Many people like dogs. But most of them don’t know dogs very much, even a dog keeper.
This summer, I received a book called ‘whisper of wisdom ’.And I read it in two days.
It is an encyclopedia of dogs. It tells us ‘why dogs do things they do.’
There are many small stories in this book; each story has a beautiful picture. I know interesting things in each story, and I saw different kinds of dogs in each pictures.
I like the story‘ the games dogs play’ very much. Yes, dogs love playing with their owners. They will be very happy if you play with him or give him some toys .But do you know? If you give a dog the same toy every day, he will be unhappy and refuse to play with you. But don’t worried, the writer tells us how to play with a dog. He says, your dog should be given only one to play with at a time. For example, you have a ball and a doll; you give the ball to your dog in the morning, and take it away in the evening. The next day, you should give him the doll. T

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Many people like dogs. But most of them，even a dog keeper， don’t know dogs very much.
调整了一下even...的语序，楼主原来的写法有点儿～中国
This summer, I received a book called ‘whisper of wisdom ’.And I finished reading it in two days.
“完成”阅读～～只用read有点问题
It is an encyclopedia of dogs. It tells us ‘why dogs do things they do.’
There are many small stories in this book; each story has a beautiful picture. I get to know interesting things in each story, and I saw
改成get to know更好些，强调一种“动态”的了解
different kinds of dogs in each picture.
each后面加单数，大概是误打哦
I like the story‘ the games dogs play’ very much. Yes, dogs love playing with their owners. They will be very happy if you play with him or give him some toys .But do you know? If you give a dog the same toy every day, he will be unhappy and refuse to play with you.
But don’t be worried, the writer tells us how to play