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Before the farmer plant the kidney beans seeds. He has to choose some good seeds first. Because the quality of the kidney beans seeds affect the kidney beans after. After farmer buys the seeds, he will use some auto-machines to put the seeds into soil. And of course he will water the seeds everyday. Because seeds need water, sunlight and air to live and grow. I don’t how he is water the seeds, but I think it is also use some auto-machines to help water. When seeds start to grow, farmer should fertilize it, so the kidney beans seed will grow better and better.
farming needs peasants chose good seeds first. After sowing, people should do irrigating, fertilizing and worm killing. The plant will grow better and better in the sunshine. And there is one more work to do, which is worm killing. Otherwise, worm will eat the leaves and stuff. Farmer has to make sure there isn’t worm eat the plant. Now the kidney beans just need time, after the seeds become kidney beans. Farmer will just us

1。第一行～应该是 播种，应该是sow the seed....动词最好不用plant....
2.kidney beans seeds affect the seeds后面加个will,“将会”影响，否则 affect 就不能用原型了哦
3.第5行， how he waters and seeds....
it is also to use....加to,否则一句两个动词啦
4.第六行，后面，so 后面加that...因为so that表示目的～～～～～这句话表示的不是so自己的因果关系哦
5.第二段，第一行，to chose,句型，need sb to do
6. 第三行，one more work to do,work不可数～建议改成step...
7. 第四行make sure there isn't any worm eating....
eating做后置定语
8. 倒数第二行，after改成before......时间顺序问题，楼主推敲下
9.最后一行 auto-machine用复数，还有那两个it....如果指代的是seeds,建议改成them..........................

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Before the farmer plants the kidney beans seeds. He has to choose some good seeds first, because the quality of the kidney beans seeds will affect the kidney beans later.Then the farmer buys the seeds, he will use some auto-machines to put the seeds into soil. And of course he will water the seeds everyday. Because seeds need water, sunlight and air to live and gro