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My travel
I had a travel to YangJiang for 3 days. The air was so clean and fresh. There was a blue sky above our head. And we could not see any white cloud. Many trees stood by the both side of the road. What a beautiful place!
On these 3 days, we went to many beautiful places. I like the blue sea very much. The golden sand, the large sky and the lively sea! Overlooked the beach, you could see the sky was connected to the sea. Usually, there were many white lines moving to the beach very fast. But when it was nearing to you, you will find it a wave! It was very easy for you to drink a bite of salty water! It is still a terrible thing for me!
Also, the weather there was very anomalous. The rain usually last for a few minutes, then there must be a sun show up right now. It always troubled me. Because I must take my umbrella when I went out. The wind also blew strongly. Though it was trouble, I am so excited. Do you know, I saw a rainbow when I was standing on the beach

My travel
I travelled to YangJiang for 3 days. The air was so clean and fresh. There was a blue sky above our head and we could not see any white cloud. Many trees stood along both sides of the road. What a beautiful place!
On these 3 days, we went to many beautiful places. I like the blue sea very much. The golden sand, the large sky and the lively sea! Overlooking the beach, you can see the sky connected to the sea. There were many white lines moving very fast to the beach. But when they come near, you will find that they are waves! It was very easy fto drink a mouthful of salty water! It was a terrible thing for me!
Also, the weather there was very anomalous. The rain usually last for a few minutes, then the sun shows up right now. It always troubled me. Because I must take my umbrella when I go out. The wind also blew strongly. Though it was troublesome, I was so excited. Do you know, I saw a rainbow when I was standing on the beach.
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