翻译片小作文

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/17 09:01:20
i want to pubish,a school newspaper for my school.because there are mant things happening inour school erery day,and after the lunch time many students haren't anything important to do,i think i will publish the newspaper once a week,i will ask for some other students to help me to publish the newspaper,the students needn't pay for it,they are free to read it.i hope i can help to make our school,more and more breautifful.

pubish?应该是publish吧?
翻译是我要为我的学校出版一份校园报,因为在我们学校每天都会发生一些事情,而且许多写生在午餐后没有什么重要的事情做,我想我会每周出版一次报纸,我会叫其他的同学来帮助我出版报纸,同学们不需要购买它,他们可以随便阅读它,我希望我能对我们的学校有所帮助,越来越美丽。
顺便说句,你这个小作文很多单词错误。。。
breautifful这个是美丽?haren't是什么?应该是haven't吧?mant应该是many吧?最好找老师或者牛逼点的同学再帮你看看。。。改下比较好