给我修改一片英语小短文

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I like to keep pets such as a dog, a cat and a bird. I have a little cat.It is very lovely.It is black and white.And it has two big eyes.When I come home after school, it will come to me as if it is very happy.And I am very glad to see her every day. When I play with her, my tire from studying is gone. I like to talk with her. It answer me with "miao miao miao". It knows my feeling. I often wash her, even sleep with her. And I always tell her stories.

I like keeping pets such as dogs, cats and birds. I have a little cat.She is very lovely.She is black and white.And she has two big eyes.When I come home after school, she will come to me as if she is very happy.And I am very glad to see her every day. When I play with her, my tire from studying is gone. I like to talk with her. She answers me with "miao miao miao". She knows my feeling. I often wash her, even sleep with her. And I always tell her stories.
写的不错啊! like doing 表示爱好习惯。用复数可表示泛指。

I like to keep pets such as dog, cat and bird. I have a small cat.It is very lovely.It is black and white.And it has two big eyes.When I come home after school, it will come to me as if she is very happy.And I am very glad to see her every day. When I play with her, my tired from studying is gone. I like to talk with her. she answer me with "miao miao miao". It knows my feeling. I often wash her, even sleep with her. And I always tell her stories.

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